I like the visual effect of the poem. Isn't it funny how two can see or read,,,,and come away with two completely different views. Well done!

You know when you get these little snibbits of words thrown together and you dont' know why.. they jsut come to you.. I wrote this a while back...

(( Dont' tell me you can see my view--don't tell me it's totally within you--for usless you are inside my mind--you can't see it exactly as I do.))

Who knows, could be a poem someday.


Angel
:)