my welcome to the maelstrom, robert ... you've painted the scene vividly here ... and caught the emotions of it quite well ... a deep sense of isolation and longing ... very nicely done ... I'll hope to read more from you here ...
I embrace my desire to feel the rhythm, to feel connected enough to step aside and weep like a widow,to feel inspired, to fathom the power, to witness the beauty, to bathe in the fountain, to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human.
Lateralus -- Tool