intriguing concepts, creative use of language, and very strong imagery presented here, galadrial. touched with a sense of liberation from those things that burden the human spirit. well crafted and an enjoyable read ... very nicely done ...
What have I become,my sweetest friend?Everyone I knowgoes away in the end. You could have it all; my empire of dirt. I will let you down. I will make you hurt.

Hurt -- Nine Inch Nails