It is hard (for me, anyways) to write a story in lyric form... You have managed to not only write a story, but to tell a tale - a very sorrowful one. I myself have never known an animal very closely, having never owned one, but I can understand the pain of parting with one... But it's the time spent well together that truly counts, I suppose.

Great work. :)
"Tonight, I won't be alone
But you know that don't mean I'm not lonely
I got nothing to prove for it's you
That I'd die to defend..."

-Bed of Roses, Bon Jovi

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