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Mystic! Thank you for pasting that for me, you're so sweet!
I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, though the star got blown away as Beth says, hee hee! But yes, there are many others out there. Glad you enjoyed, thanks again for the song, yes, it will undoubtedly stick in my head for awhile! Take care my friend! peace!--Mike
Beth, we must find this sniper! I was kinda down when I wrote this, can ya tell? Did the impact give it away? hee hee!
I'm feeling much better now. A metaphor? Hmmm, I'll have to think about that one. I saw it as going into a supernovae explosion I guess, exploding because I was being denied my dreams perhaps, or because I had killed it perhaps by wishing too much, in a way killing my dreams or my self somehow myself. Make sense? I don't know, like i said, i was down. When I get down i get in a strange frame of mind i guess,like the other 23 hours of the day I suppose, hee hee!
Glad ya liked! peace!--Mike
You know Nikole, you are absolutely right! That's why I just blew my star outta the sky there, yep. Saw Beth was depending on hers too much as well, so's I took aim and just shot her star down also, yep sure did. Hee hee!
(O i'm gonna hear about that one)
Seriously though, you are absolutely right, dreams can come true but one has to want them to and be willing to make them happen. And one has to learn to let go of the ones that won't. I guess I'm stuck somewhere in between, letting go of some quite fine, but wishing on the others that i'll likely never see. Long, long story.
Glad you enjoyed this! Take care! peace!--Mike
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