knowing your penchant
for mellifluous meter, i
read this aloud straight
from the page.

What a delight!
the write vocalizes with practiced fluency.
i would be proud to read this piece
in front of any gathering.

the story-line was well and thoroughly
developed. if you keep writing "happy
ending" material like this, you'll have to
change your screen-name.:)

The harpist of the sun is a strong protagonist.
is this your creation, or does the character
spring from other sources in myth or literature?

excellent post.
neil.



You don't create art; ART created you. - J. Reuben Zappin