WELL done, Sir!!

a compact and powerful write.
experience shows in your ability
to pack so much story-line into
relatively few stanzas.

impressive and enjoyable.

wonderful post!
neil.


a man can drown to death
in a teaspoon of shallow words
- Joe Brewer [sintaxtheterrific]
You don't create art; ART created you. - J. Reuben Zappin