I always am so happy to see a new post here from you, dark ... and you never disappoint me! this is wonderful ... superb in imagery and flow ... and a wonderful and engaging tale of fantasy touched with romanticism ... loved it -- maybe when I grow up I can learn to write metered rhyme with your apparent ease *laughs loudly*
Dont turn away, I pray youve heard the words Ive spoken. Dare to believe for one last time, and then Ill let theDarkness cover me, deny everything, slowly walk away to breathe again on my own.

Disturbed -- Darkness



The Maelstrom