Ah...so blow as in blowhard, then? Makes much more sense now! :) That opens up a lot more of the meaning...

We're/We've - either sense works, but now that you've explained it, again, it makes sense the way you've used it!

Sometimes footnotes can be useful if you are using archaic or colloquial words...or simply very rarely used words! Anything that helps the reader pick up the sense/meaning of the piece, so that they can appreciate the images.

Don't worry about the 2:1 rules at the moment...it's a bit thin in here so far, so not much we can do about that! I'll have a dig around; there's some older pieces that could probably do with a bit of a polish! ;)



Every new beginning comes from
some other beginnings end...

Why not try a new beginning...
at The Maelstrom...