Yeah, don't tell anyone, but I've been a trekkie forever :) (But only for the original and TNG.)

Glad you found something of use in the suggestions and thanks for the clarification on breech vs. breach. My misunderstanding; that's why I ask about these things. It's not always easy to discern or understand another's intent.

As I said to Sue, I often have difficulty in conceiving a very strong volta and think a subtle one can work quite well. My comment was merely observation and fuel for thought.

I'll look forward to the revisions :)
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