OOOH! I am a trekkie! I like the new one with S Bacula- and fwewf! The vulcan chick is H.O.T. :D Anyhow, that's an embarassing secret, so don't sperad it around too much. THOUGH, I couldn't stand Deep Space 9- what a boring premise: "A Space Station" Wheeeee! :rollin Lets have some more Kirk makin' it with wierd aliens... 0]

Yea, pretense is bad... but that is why ya never judge a book on its cover :p I like tradition; NOW, if you had harped on me putting ROMAN NUMERALS!!!! in my title lines, I would :o to your pretense comment! NOW THATS PRETENSOUS! (if I could spell it right...) :lol

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GOOD SUGGESTIONS!

I will definate work out the other "and" you are totally correct in that way!

S1L5... ok, I will take a look at that carefully.

generations- you are totally correct again... I will have a heartfelt talk with my secretary "Wilson"...

breach- ummmm... what happened? I honestly have it as breech in my original... ummmmm.... maybe spell check did a number on it... Hmmmm ***edited- No wait, I meant "breech" as in the cavity at the rear of a gun where shells are loaded. I like playing off WS's stuff like: "Once more into the breech dear friends" from H. the V***

Yea, upon/thereupon is weak... I was going more for internal rhymes... :b

Yes, the volta is not very pronounced either... I am not apt for strong voltas in the main... amateurish? I will take note and consider that in the future! THOUGH, now this might be a great topic for "Eddies": how to volta; BECAUSE, I have read WS's stuff, and his turns are fairly... well, unpronounced as well! It could very well be the loose nut behind the wheel though.

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egads!