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davi, my friend!
always a treat to see one of yours available.
the first thing that occurred to me was that i
think i remember your having written of a similar
scene [a crisply rendered city harbor]. well ...
it worked then and it works now. the language
here seems relaxed, comfortable and able to
take deep breaths. the narrative supplies enough
detail to intrigue the reader without laboring
through an exhaustive analysis. the relationship
of the characters is mysteriously evocative.
just lots of fun to read because it reads easily,
smoothly and rewards attention with color and
vitality.
a write typical of your love for a given subject.
again ... always a pleasure.
don't work too hard.
respect.
neil.
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