A barrage of images, thoughts, and feelings captured in a very creative form, fauxcajun. Fun to see how just your couplets could create a perfectly comprehensive piece on their own. Nicely done! :)
Anyone can write of beauty -- of life, friendship, love everlasting -- but it is those rare, brave souls who dare to live their words that are the true poets of the universe. That is where true beauty lies. ~JaML