strongly evocative of the feelings experienced by an addict. your poem is very descriptive without using many words... it is meant to be felt, and it is, by one who has been there in one form or another. Excellent job in recapturing and putting to paper a despairing and desperate experience.

Blaketheme


"I surrender all control
To the desire that consumes me whole
And leads me by the hand to infinity
That lies in wait at the heart of me"