I realy enjoyed this poem, paticularly the words of part 1. I also like how you divided it eight lines on top, eight lines on the bottom with a one line division in the middle. You seem to have described her experience today and then segued into tomorrow where she still seems to be waiting for 'something'.
I will have to read it a few more times to really absorb the feeling of it but it does create an air of expectancy... without knowing if it will be fulfilled.

Blaketheme
"I surrender all control
To the desire that consumes me whole
And leads me by the hand to infinity
That lies in wait at the heart of me"