I became tense with the first line. Relaxed into the flow with the next. Had a pleasant reverie between L3 and 5. Became tense again on L6, and was slammed by the last line.

You took me on an emotional ride in only seven lines.

Amazing. Well done, Rob.
Eva Olson -
Live every day like it's your last, 'cause one day you're gonna be right. - Ray Charles